I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, October 16, 2019
Holiday Movie
Hey Bloggers today and yesterday my class was writing about are holiday in the holiday i watched 3 movies but i can only choose one so i did and i wrote about Dora and The lost city of Gold
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Hi Ngarangi It is me Roisin from St bernadettes school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added describing the day if it was sunny cloudy that is cool.
I also watched the lost city of gold in the movie theater cool.
how about saying what the movie was about but it is fine I just saw it but other people didn't watch it and I forgot.
Keep going keep it up fantastic.
by Roisin
Hey Roisin its Ngarangi
DeleteI like how you told me how much you loved my writting.
thanks for reminding me that people might had not watch the movie but it dosent mean I was spoiling it right
From Ngarangi
Hi Narangi,
DeleteYes you are right, thank you!
thank you from Roisin