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Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Holiday Movie

Hey Bloggers today and yesterday my class was writing about are holiday in the holiday i watched 3 movies but i can only choose one so i did and i wrote about Dora and The lost city of Gold

3 comments:

  1. Hi Ngarangi It is me Roisin from St bernadettes school.
    I like how you added describing the day if it was sunny cloudy that is cool.
    I also watched the lost city of gold in the movie theater cool.
    how about saying what the movie was about but it is fine I just saw it but other people didn't watch it and I forgot.
    Keep going keep it up fantastic.
    by Roisin

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    1. Hey Roisin its Ngarangi
      I like how you told me how much you loved my writting.
      thanks for reminding me that people might had not watch the movie but it dosent mean I was spoiling it right
      From Ngarangi

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    2. Hi Narangi,
      Yes you are right, thank you!
      thank you from Roisin

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