During reading my class had a book and made a story web my book was called Spider Soup.
My story was about a spider named Webster he got bubblegum from a boy named Micheal and well he was eating bubblegum he got his legs stuck and mum put him in the dishwasher and he suffers but he was alive Micheal was in tears but one day his mum had soup than Webster came out of it.
We had to write out the Characters,Setting,problem,Outcome,Actions in our story.
I thought i did well but the book was hard.
Can you tell me what would you have done if your pet died would you do the same thing as Micheal?
Hi Ngarangi,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put what happened to the spider I think that is a nice start! That reminds me of my story web that I did it was the beast of Moogil. Is it okay if you finish the outcome and the actions because I think the outcome is going to be exiting? Can you please tell why the character felt sad and happy?
Keep on going your doing so well!
From Izza
Hi Ngarangi
ReplyDeleteI like how you are putting so much Detail in your reding, story web I saw you put No writng on Action and ooutcome but that is okay if you do not know what happend there.
that reminds me of what I did I think I did a good job same with you what I did is I added detal.
I think you just need to put the title of the book in the middle because I did not know were the title is I thought you did not put it in there
Could you please Do it?
Keep it up You are doing a good job!! (:
From Roisin
hi, Ngarangi
ReplyDeletei like how you added what happened in the problem and who the characters are.
this reminds me of my story web i did my one was about a alien and a kid called tim and meep got teleport-ed to another planet called moogill.
this also reminds me of my story web i did.
can you add more about what happened
from Lennox
Hi Ngarangi,
ReplyDeleteAwesome work on your story web.You completed most of it and plenty of detail. I am really curious as to the actions and outcome.If my pet died I would be extremely sad and I would bury him in the garden and put a cross where shes laid to rest.Thanks for sharing.Keep up the good work Ngarangi.
Trish Wakefield