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Thursday, November 21, 2019

My Awesome, amazing super weekends

This week our awesome teacher made us write a fabulous recount. We had to add are descriptive tools. Alliteration is a letter together like Fabulous, fantastic, frizzy it all starts with F. There is more than that tho like noun adjective, verb metaphors,adverb,similes and more. 

My writing was about my weekends and what we did. 

Can you find my descriptive tools and also rate me out of 10.  

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  1. AnonymousNovember 25, 2019 at 2:45 PM

    Hi Ngarangi It is me Izza
    I like the start of your writing I think it is really cool
    I like how you said frizzy,fun Fantastic time I think it was a cool hook.
    can you put a little detail of what you wore for breakfast? I also saw that you put alliteration because you fun,frizzy fantastic also that was really cool.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 28, 2019 at 9:32 AM

    Hi Ngarangi
    i like how you put more dital at the being and end too.
    i like how you had good iders in your writing.
    you did a very good job on your writing. i like how you had some Alliteration.
    From Jasmine

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